BananaBreadMuffin's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[-The Tower-]

Great hook

Painfully hard, painfully addictive, however I'd recommend just a couple of gameplay changes:

Firstly have a quick restart button. Lets say hitting 'r' automatically restarts the game, regardless of where you are.

Secondly, try and reduce the 'black screen' time before the scoreboards pop up. If possible.

Thirdly, have perhaps the score/jump bar at the bottom 50% opacity grey rather than black, and have a clear line that shows "You cannot land on a platform below this line", as a few times I've landed on platforms I can't actually see anymore.

[BOMP Shooting Tutorial]

Why don't you......

Instead of lowering the alpha, make the button a dot, and change the frame that says "hit" to the leg or the arm or whatever. The "hit" frame in the button timeline represent where you can click to make the button activate.

MattLutton responds:

I was trying to make it as simple as possible with the least amount of action script so that people who are new to flash can understand it easily.

[The Life of Stars]

God damn you.

You could've relased it in March when I was revising for my GCSEs, you bastard. >:(

[Actionscript Keyboard]

A really nice Idea...

But the cursor obscures the numbers a little bit

Reis-Lover responds:

sorry. I'll try and fix that up if it survives judgment

[Cursors of the Future!]

What you could do...

Is include a tutorial for how to make them. Especially the water one, I loved that.

[Orbox]

It's pretty good.

Make more unused blocks to throw the user off their course.

And have some catchy music quietly in the background.

[[old] Virtualife 1.02]

Pretty good...

Graphics: Quite nice and innocent looking... the little fps counter wasn't really needed, as there wasn't much animation.

Style: Cool style, although already done in that stick thingy. but a cool idea.

Sound: Nice and well used

Violence: None as such...

Interactivity: The whole thing is a game. And a great game at that.

Humour: Not really.

Overall: Great game, just do the following stuff:

Make sure strength, charm, and stuff affect your pay. Also, have different jobs have different requirements. Maybe have some jobs $50 x charm or something like that. Also, see if you can stop people going into negative dollars... I know you cant buy stuff while in debt, but make limits to what else you can do while in the negativeness.
For some reason I cant drive my car twice. I drive once, then teh button has dissappeared.
Have different things available to do in morning, afternoon, evening... and have time progress over... well... time.

Kenney responds:

thanks, I'm 100% sure I gonna use that $50 x charm,knowledge or strenght job earning!